As I am not a native English speaker, I would like to hear some opinions about the new phrasing of this chapter. I am particularly interested if there is too much information in this introductory chapter that would be better moved in subchapters "How to Create NPCs?" and "How to Create Scenes?" and "How to Create Victory Conditions?".
What do you think? Would it be better to make the chapters elsehow?
How do you like the rephrasing?
As I am not a native English speaker, I would like to hear some opinions about the new phrasing of this chapter. I am particularly interested if there is too much information in this introductory chapter that would be better moved in subchapters "How to Create NPCs?" and "How to Create Scenes?" and "How to Create Victory Conditions?".
What do you think? Would it be better to make the chapters elsehow?