Well it was bound to happen, when different points of view mesh some times you offend. It seems I did so. I had no intent to be offensive, just want some point of view from any who have use the sites I was looking at. Be that as it may I can only conclude from the small on-pour of "WTF is wrong with you"s that I was asking something wrong. While I will not be stopping in my attempts at writing C.O.R.P.S. as well as posting it here, I can not but feel hesitant in asking anymore questions.
thank you for your time.

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We're here to critisize and evaluate other peoples work and decisions. not to hold your hand. afterall the internet is full of people not supportive of somebodys decisions.
You must not be that mature if you think we're blessed by you being here. While i never did see your game, i do not question how well it is written or if it is bad or good untill i look at it.
I was merely saying its probably not a good idea to publish your first works. Buck up and don't take critisizm the wrong way. Nobody here is trying to offend you, we all make comments on eachothers work and we all have our own veiws.
I realize at times it takes me awhile to warm up to new members; usually some noob posts 1 or 2 times, a completly worthless blog or gums up another persons book.